First Love

first love
she loved her daddy
before she loved you

Inspired by Jingle Poetry.

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11 responses to “First Love

  1. Awww…short and sweet.

  2. Hi! It was cute, short and sweet like Mary mentioned.
    I wrote a poem on similar lines about my dad.

    http://musenmotivation.wordpress.com/2010/06/18/a-daughters-father/
    Shail

  3. That’s why so many girls want to marry a ‘daddy’ figure, just as so many boys want to marry a ‘mommy’ figure.
    (Nobody can ever measure up to those ideals)
    Nice piece.

  4. u make me smile,
    authentic and true love poem,
    love your humor.

  5. 1st love and daddy i can relate to that since i have a daughter thanks for reassuring me that shes gona growup to say this someday 😀
    wonderful three lines ever 😀

    cheers!!!
    my pots :
    http://wiserskydiver.wordpress.com/2010/09/01/temple-of-my-prayers/
    http://wiserskydiver.wordpress.com/2010/08/23/shes-not-yet-opened-her-eyes/
    http://wiserskydiver.wordpress.com/2010/09/10/intelligent-light-in-a-fools-life/

  6. Wow…love the sentiment!! Great right and so true what Eric said!! xx

  7. Loved it, so tight, so precise, so true!

  8. short, sweet n simple.. loved it! 🙂

    My Potluck Is Here

  9. Scent of my heart

    So simple, but very beautiful!

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