It’s Monday – POTLUCK time again!!!!  The theme for this week is Nature’s Elements: Air, Water, Fire and Earth

Photographer: Ernest von Rosen


Heaven and Earth were moved
The moment that we touched.
The fire within me burned,
The passion seemed too much!
A flame no water could quench-
As I inhaled the air you breathed
Tasting obsession’s first drench.

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Love to read your honest thoughts – positive and otherwise!


10 responses to “Obsession

  1. passionate burn,
    lovely piece…

  2. have fun,
    Thanks for the lovely support….

    your poem is perfect for our potluck!

  3. Passion, well-expressed.

  4. Good take – obsession burns hotter than hellfire. I like it!

  5. Hey, you encorporated all the elements! Well done!

    (Glad you liked mine too!) 🙂

  6. Elemental passion– what could be more perfect?

  7. Very interesting way to include all the elements and make it look so co-ordinated and well. Very nice thought I liked it..

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
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    Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com

  8. support us by visiting a few poets near your entry.
    thanks for the contribution…

    here is one of mine:

  9. So very interesting and a nicely wielded pen here. Thanks for linking with Potluck my friend xx

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